| Commission for carcasshellhound | |
| Commissioner: carcasshellhound | Status: Canceled |
| Commissioned Artist: Strive | Commission Type: Comic |
| Primary Reference: | Original Price: 70.00 CAD |
| Pose: | Price Adjustment: 330.00 CAD |
| Filter Level: General | Total Price: 400.00 CAD |
| Last Update: 03-15-2015 01:30 PM | Reason: added more pages |
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Rocksalt - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10661962/ - I have permission from the owner to have this character in the comic. Terry - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12343494/ Terry sneaks back stage and finds his dressing room. She enters and sees he's not there. Upon hearing someone coming, the Zangoose hides quickly in his wardrobe with a crack in the double doors to see out. Rocksalt walks in and starts to undress, giving Terry quite the view as her jaw drops, stunned. He walks over and opens the doors to find the Zangoose, face red as a firetruck. He doesn't seem too shocked since he's had other fan who have tried sneaking back stage to meet him. Intrigued by the situation, he grins and takes the smaller female's claw, coaxing her out and running a finger along her chin slowly. Terry shudders at his touch, slipping one of his fingers into mouth as her tongue caressed it. Rocksalt chuckled, "Well aren't you eager... how about something more... filling?" He took his finger back, stood and undid his belt and pants, revealing his half-hard member. Terry hesitated for a second then started licking his meat as he moaned, she sucked his tip then as much of it as she could take. His member throbbing, he takes her to the small couch and thrusts in her viciously. (Positions could vary and ending with a creampie) The comic finds it's end with Terry, snatch messy, from the night before asleep on the couch in Rocksalt's arms. So the starting bid of the YCH comic auction was $180 for 3 pages. I assume it's $60 per page? You tell me otherwise if I'm wrong. Either more expensive or not, I'll take an extra 3 pages if I may. Hope you are ok with that. :3 If not, I already have a shorter version made up in case. I'm just being as clear as I possibly can in describing the pages and panels. I changed some things up. I hope the following is alright. Page 1 Panel 1 - (Back view of Terry) Terry is in a street alley way, looking out at a concert hall, music blasting from it. Panel 2 - (Front view to show her peeking around the corner) Her curiousity peeks finally enough as she decides to check it out. Panel 3 - Terry sneaks into another alley behind the hall, past the busy security and crowd. Panel 4 - (Small panel, bust shot) She grins as she looks back while she sneaks in an Emergency Exit. Panel 5 - (Small panel, bust shot) Now she forwards her attention to the stage and is shocked by the source of the music! Page 2 Panel 1 - (Full body) Rocksalt on stage, putting on an amazing show as the crowd ROARS. Panel 2 - Terry is gawking at the handsome devil, stars in her eyes and all~ Panel 3 to 5 - (Each small panels, maybe side by side) [P3]Terry runs through the legs of the crowd, [P4]under seats and [P5]past the mosh pit in front. (Or you can just do Terry running through the crowd simply for 1 or 2 panels.) Panel 6 - (Back view of Terry as she cheers Rocksalt on, right in front of the stage) Page 3 -Later- Panel 1 - Terry sneaks back stage... Panel 2 - And finds Rocksalt's dressing room. Panel 3 - She hears someone coming, entering fast! Panel 4 - She hides in the wardrobe with a crack in the door. Panel 5 - Rocksalt enters, tossing off his black leather jacket onto a chair. Panel 6 - (Back view of Rocksalt) He walks towards the wardrobe. (Maybe have a very worried eye peering out) Page 4 Panel 1 - (Small) Rocksalt's hand on the handle... Panel 2 - (Small) Opens it to find the blushing Zangoose... Panel 3 - (Small) .......Terry smiles....... Panel 4 - Rocksalt looks down at her funny... Panel 5 - He laughs, nothing new for a rockstar like him! Panel 6 - He kneels down to her her and grins while Terry is bluuushing more... Page 5 Panel 1 - He coaxes her out, taking her claw gently Panel 2 - He sits her on the couch and runs a finger along her chin as she shudders Panel 3 - Terry slips his finger into her mouth, blushing heavily as she looks up at him, very embarressed... Panel 4 - (Small head shot of just Rocksalt's jaw speaking) "How about more than a simple little autograph?" He chuckles. Panel 5 - (Knees up) Showing Rocksalt looking down ("well that was fast" expression of slight shock) as Terry eagerly works away at taking his belt off. Page 6 Panel 1 - Terry is sucking on his member's tip while he groans Panel 2 - Missionary position Panel 3 - Terry on top, riding Rocksalt while facing him Panel 4 - Doggy style, Rocksalt and Terry cumming and yelling out Panel 5 - (Small) On the side showing his sperm racing for the egg Panel 6 - Rocksalt sitting on the couch, smiling down as Terry lays her head on his lap, passed-out. His member half-hard on it's side and messy, Terry's snatch also very messy. --- Tell me what you think, if you can work with this or not. Won't be disappointed if not. :3 |
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